Great story, love your imagination! There are many of us who don’t remember botanical names or all of the rules of writing, but we are just reading for the pure enjoyment of your story. Now to finding a picture of a snapping turtle.
One of your best. But you still need a little bit of copy-editing. In the next to last sentence of the next to last paragraph, delete "went." I'm sorry, it's compulsive.
Great story, love your imagination! There are many of us who don’t remember botanical names or all of the rules of writing, but we are just reading for the pure enjoyment of your story. Now to finding a picture of a snapping turtle.
I was a C student in English classes so I"m trying to catch up on the rules!
absolutely wonderful to hear from you - Hope that you are doing well - it appears to be so!
Bill
Sweet Story. Did the turtle get named ?
No - he just got moved to a better pond.
One of your best. But you still need a little bit of copy-editing. In the next to last sentence of the next to last paragraph, delete "went." I'm sorry, it's compulsive.
William, I'm making myself do 2 essays a week in order to learn -- thanks for taking the time to help me!
Nothing like farm life