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Apr 20, 2023Liked by Jenks Farmer

I’m loving your description of the lady in the salon. I can really envision her, from her hair to the stockinged toes.

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Mar 15, 2023Liked by Jenks Farmer

Love this story and look forward to the ending. It does capture Southern small town!

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Mar 15, 2023Liked by Jenks Farmer

It really captures small town lifea nd that concept of being invisible . I love it

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Love how we don't get that Sugarbear is a dog until midway in this fragment! This is a very promising start.

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