How the chicken thief from the country club and a gay, redneck landscaper found each other.
I’m loving your description of the lady in the salon. I can really envision her, from her hair to the stockinged toes.
Love this story and look forward to the ending. It does capture Southern small town!
It really captures small town lifea nd that concept of being invisible . I love it
Love how we don't get that Sugarbear is a dog until midway in this fragment! This is a very promising start.
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Small Town Outcasts
I’m loving your description of the lady in the salon. I can really envision her, from her hair to the stockinged toes.
Love this story and look forward to the ending. It does capture Southern small town!
It really captures small town lifea nd that concept of being invisible . I love it
Love how we don't get that Sugarbear is a dog until midway in this fragment! This is a very promising start.
Proofing comment: end of paragraph 2, line 6: no comma after "short."